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Wed, Oct. 15th, 2003, 12:57 pm
riotboy187:

hey guys. the following poem isn't all that good. i'm not saying that to be self-effacing, since i'm not really into that- its just my honest opinion. i just wanted to put something up on this community so that we might get started. you don't have to comment on it, but i was wondering if you guys could tell me what you read in terms of contemporary poetry, or even old stuff.. just what poets are you into? why? i also want to find some good experimental language stuff-- writing that is pushing boundaries, but not sacrificing readability and the potential for real emotional connection in doing so. anway, comment if you can think of anything like that, or just tell me who yr favorite poets are. thanks. <3


interrum


cager
lazy stained and fading
laying face-up
holding still
and helping.

hold me down and
crawl by fours or twos.

i'm afraid of what you might think.

falling rain or racing
hiding pacing prying
placing perfect rows of prints
on pavement.

cold air is best on lungs inside
and free deep breaths.

light is grey on days and nights
turn yellow tungsten patchy
thankful warm and playful
pulling pushing laughing.

incandescent
uneffible
indefatiguable.

or just long hairs that prickle
droop or dance
cast inky thinner thin
fine shadows

while walls grow tall
and time makes time makes time
split open.

Mon, Oct. 20th, 2003 03:17 pm (UTC)
mrmaxkrafft

also, i can't figure out how to post anything to this page. suggestions?

Thu, Oct. 23rd, 2003 12:14 pm (UTC)
hardcorae

Go to the update journal page, and above where you type, there's a drop-down menu that says "journal to post in." Select ctowncollective and you should be all set.